Cosmic Love

Cosmic love任然是一首自己写的歌，以前也写过些英文词，但没发表，这首歌是我特地写给母亲的，其实在母亲节时就有这想法但一直没完成。总算到生日了，觉得在生日把这首歌送给母亲也格外的有意义，英文歌词不像中文那么好写，所以有些相对于老美的rap还略显青涩的地方希望大家能接受。毕竟感情是真挚的，自己对这首歌还算满意，但副歌部分总觉的怪怪的，有朋友说我就不适合唱R&B，我也想找个女声feat一下，希望日后能有更完美的版本吧。大家要踊跃提些建议啊~~

[Version 1]
Cosmic,its like sth you'llnever reach but you could watch it.
Cosmic,its like sth you'll never touch but you could feel it.
Listen,ahh yeah,when you see through my eyes,i goota angel in my eyes.
I know you were the one who always keep me alive.
You told me you still young stay happy
stay tough
I konw you care me all the time from head to the rough.
You want to see me to be fast grow up.
You said that you are proud of me I was bron to be a star.
That evertime you feed me a lot,told me I should never lie.
I kown that lady i konw that ma.
You are such beautiful light and you burn youself to light our heart.
Dreams like that you weave
for me,through the cradle till my hand got to the sky.
Yeah the beat right now you gonna listen up.
My lyrics go so far,that's the feeling I got about you.
When you got white lines on your hairs ma.
I know that was thinking me too much,fot years works go hard but you'll never give it up.
[Chorus]
When I believe that I could see,you pay everything for me,that I pay nothing for you.
When I retort that is my fault,you always let me chill out,but I dont understand you.(This time I could understand you)(*2)
[Version 2]
I write this song,before my bithday come,back it up,hope that bliss will stirring around.
I hope you know if I gotta 1 check for my own,that I'll spend no dough and give it to you all.
My birthday is you most painful day,no one could replace(you) even till my last day.
It's the day you lay,I wish you happy everythday,not just on my birthday I'll luv everyday.
When the doomesday come,we'll still be strong.
No matter what the life's on I'm still your son.
I konw sometime we do the wrong thing and you forgot.
How could you do that cuz you think about us.
You like the Hera in the sky and you care about us.
Jeal about us,reminise the time we grow up.
My sister and I make everthing screw up.
What a dope boy I am,this song you listen up.
I'm sincerely yours,stand here,and sorry to you my ma.
Once I saw your tears rolling round your eyes.
My heart go so broken,and my mind go so blind.
I show my vigor,put my anger and you all accept.
How regret I am to do the Fuckin shit.
This time I make concept,everything'll be alright.
My mama MeLin is my beautiful Queen.
Gentle lady no sin,fingers wear no ring.(here we go now)
[Chorus]
When I belive that I could see,you care nothing but me,I care anthing but you.
When I retort taht is my fault,don't let me chill out,I want to repay you.(*2)
[Version 3]
Sometime I'm so lost,so moaned,so dump.
Can't find my way that lead to my stop.
I kown my man Kanye West just leave his ma.
But he still struggle like he has been more strong.
I say no more doubt and no more giuse.
I'll be the man who support your life.
Right here,thought you,get the old school.
Imma big bog right now and I'll never play cool.
Yeah this song is for you my Queen and my boo .
Nobody is a fool,I'll sing it for you too.
Strech out the world is your cosmic love.
There's no luv could beyound,and that is the one luv.
I'm the 1st thing you think when the sunshine break.
and the last thing you think when you sleep in night.
From the start of cry,till I end up my write.
And this song is for you ma,who is my love and my life.
[Sing]
When the rain is pouring down,when the sky no angel smilling down.
I will see you,to see you in my dream.
I want to cuddle you wish I will always be with you.